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Chapter: Prologue
EDIT 10/22/17: This page was redone! Original page(s) and commentary below (either it was a self-fulfilling prophecy or just plain OCD):
Those are the most ridiculous footprints I have ever seen. Someday I’m redrawing that panel.
I like it. Obviously it looks good – you maintain the detail and sketchy-ness of your drawing while also giving it what appears to be digital coloring.
The footsteps in the last frame there are great. It’s always best to communicate plot elements by showing rather than telling, and that’s a more subtle means of doing so.
I rather like those footprints. They’re giving clues that we should be paying attention!
I’m glad you guys like the footprints. I meant by ridiculous that they’re way too close together. If I ever redraw it, I’m just going to space them out more.
I’m a bit surprised it’s in color! Will all the updates be like this, or will it only be for the epilogue? Either way, both look amazing and I’d love it either way. <3 The new name is kick butt awesome btw.
Just the prologue & the chapter covers are in colour. *pokes Reby* You ought to know, you’ve read most of it already!
Wow. Cool stuff so far. I really like the mysterious introduction and the blue colour scheme. Keep it up. ^^
I only saw it in greyscale though, before the color got put into it. xD Plus it’s a redux, so I just wanted to check to make sure. Btw, the pages look epic. XD!!!!!!