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Chapter: Prologue
EDIT 10/22/17: This page was redone!
Original page and commentary below:
Teze looks far too much like a certain Bleach character in these first few pages. I have since given him a bit of a different design that got rid of the most of the resemblance.
lol, I didn’t even notice that Teze looked like Toshiro until you mentioned it. I like his scarf and CONGRATS ON STARTING!!!! *throws glitter*
oh wow! this is awesome so far ^^ good job. I’m glad to see your back to being able to get back to comics again, because your really good with them. ^^ *is all happy now*
SO interesting to get to compare this to the original version! The snow effects are so wonderfully done, and extending it to the margins really gives it the feeling of this wild natural weather extending beyond the pages all around hyou.