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Chapter: Chapter 2: Loud Beaks
This is the first page to be inked in Manga Studio and worked at 600dpi instead of 300. I was amazed at how much crisper it looks, and am very pleased with it. The art from here on out is guaranteed to be 110% better.
I finally fixed the issue of the tiny images on the World page. They are all now normal-sized. It was due to a coding brain-fart on my part that I only just remembered how to remediate.
Chocobo Tales is the cutest and quirkiest game I’ve ever played. Some of the mini-games are ridiculously hard even to just advance the plot- forget unlocking extras- but I love the vast variety of tasks.
Actually, I thought, the somewhat muted colours were supposed to set the tone and the mood of the comic. Considering the cloudy sky in the background, the clothes appear almost too bright for my taste. But that’s probably due to the detailed backgrounds, which are really a forte of this comic.
I got sick of using dull colors all the time. I felt the need to brighten up my art.
I actually really like how you did the colors in the page! On the whole, they seem to work allright to me. I know it’s quite hard to do that sometimes, because the color scheme becomes too wide for a single page and makes you struggle, but you seem to have managed to make a very natural looking balance. And the brigthness fits your style in my opinion. I like stories that don’t necessarily have a style that screams “dark and gritty” while they can go there if it’s necessary. Ehrm… I hope I didn’t go overboard with the post. Great work, Flower! Keep it up 🙂 !
Not at all! Thank you, Soff! 🙂