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Remember that one time Rava just happened to eavesdrop on an extremely essential plot conversation? Rava remembers. Of course for him that was only a week ago but for us it’s been six years.
This is one of those few pages that would work better if this comic were in colour… however I made a strict rule for myself when I started: no colour anywhere outside of the prologue pages. This is partly to make the comic easier to print when that day comes, and partly to help myself avoid the temptation to add colour to every page I like or think is significant. Because if I did, I’d probably never finish this comic.
Edit- If you happened to see this during the first few hours after it posted, you might remember the dialogue reading differently. Those words you saw were LIES and this is the only version of the page that ever truly existed.
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…..I may have struggled a bit with the wording on this page and initially the dialogue felt really awkward and unnatural. I’m still not completely happy with it, but this is the point where I say ‘oh well’ and move on to the next page.
Anor, yes!! Save the day! <3 Love the effect tangling around Anor in the last panel.
Dialogue seems to flow fine to me!
Thank you! The dialogue is definitely a lot better now than it was before I edited it. XD
Anor: “By the power of plot points!”